Finding the Empress
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Finding the Empress
Highbirth City
A vast city state, once ruled by the benevolent half-elf empress, Drizaea. Little is known of the place by outsiders, the city guard rarely lets anyone in, and if they enter the price to leave is high.
From a distance, one can see massive spires just inside the city walls. Four in number, one for each direction on the compass. The center holds the vast palace.
Highbirth wasn't always a city-state. It had once beheld half the continent of Bloodkin, some 5000 miles in diameter, if one were to draw a circle around it. Since these days much within have changed.
A vast city state, once ruled by the benevolent half-elf empress, Drizaea. Little is known of the place by outsiders, the city guard rarely lets anyone in, and if they enter the price to leave is high.
From a distance, one can see massive spires just inside the city walls. Four in number, one for each direction on the compass. The center holds the vast palace.
Highbirth wasn't always a city-state. It had once beheld half the continent of Bloodkin, some 5000 miles in diameter, if one were to draw a circle around it. Since these days much within have changed.
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Nice I think this has a lot of potential. I could really work with something like this. Now time for bashing.... Hahah
Keidas- Friend
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Join date : 2008-03-25
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I'm all for saving the Empress. It's an Empress! SHE BETTER BE GOOD LOOKING FEL!!!! j/j
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A little bare if you ask me but otherwise it sound OK
NinjaWolf- Posts : 1
Join date : 2008-03-24
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NinjaWolf wrote:A little bare if you ask me but otherwise it sound OK
Well. That's why I'm having people critique it. Anything you'd like to add to it?
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Is this city a metropolis or something? Never done an Urban RP so I'm quite curious about that.
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Yes, it is indeed a metropolis. Although I don't think we'll be spending much actual RP time inside the city...
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Well, I'm interested in it. :]
Hopefully you'll have more to add. Otherwise, it's fine by me. -Not so picky.- Rescuing an empress is an important task after all. -Nod.-
Hopefully you'll have more to add. Otherwise, it's fine by me. -Not so picky.- Rescuing an empress is an important task after all. -Nod.-
Fluffy- Friend
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